Request :
During the first days of the voyage, the ship is hit by a freak storm coming from the Bermuda Triangle.
After that, the two friends start noticing incredible changes in their bodies. They are becoming younger, healthier, and sexier each passing day.
Pictures were requested but I changed the last. Hope it's okay !
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Carmen and
Lucinde were best friends since forever. At 72 YO, as old widows, they decided to
spend all her economies by offering themselves a world trip. It will be fun,
they were sure of it. But they didn’t expect what they met.
During the
trip, as they were into a boat navigating near the famous Bermuda Triangle. A
strange storm appeared from nowhere as it was only blue sky one minute before.
A lighting shocked the boat and engulfed all its passengers into a purple aura.
When the sea finally calmed down, everybody was confused. But the trip
continued without anything extraordinary anymore.
But as they
arrived to Brazil, Carmen and Lucinda felt more energetic. They could walk without
being quickly tired like before. And the next day, at their hotel, their
reflections showed them as 60 YO. They realized they were rejuvenating day by
day. In South Africa, they were 50YO.
In Egypt, they could pass as their own daughters. Two weeks after, Carmen, as an early 30, had her first French kiss with a real French man as, some days later, Lucinda had some wild sex with a young Italian guy.
In Egypt, they could pass as their own daughters. Two weeks after, Carmen, as an early 30, had her first French kiss with a real French man as, some days later, Lucinda had some wild sex with a young Italian guy.
Fortunately,
as they were finally to 20, their miraculous rejuvenation stopped. They decided
to continue their trip, but sleeping to youth hostels across then world,
encountering other young people, as students Karen and Lucie.
I really liked how you unfolded the story, very well done!
RépondreSupprimerAlso, great choice on the pictures, they fit nicely :)
-Wiz
This is awesome! Thanks a lot for doing my request!
RépondreSupprimerI don't mind the change of the last picture, I liked the former one, but maybe it was a little gratuitous having a bikini scene out of nowhere. The picture you replaced it with works much better and the women in it have a greater physical resemblance with the previous ones.
You had a great idea making the voyage a world trip, also I really like the paragraph detailing their sexual escapades, fantastic job!
As I wrote my story, I though your last picture was not suitable anymore. So I decided to change it.
SupprimerGlad you don't mind :)
J'aime mais je vois qu'il y en a aussi en Français.
RépondreSupprimerRare de voir des captions AP en Français, même AR. N'hésite pas à me contacter :)
J'ai en effet commencé par du français mais je me suis dit que ce n'était pas assez... "ouvert" à l'international. J'ai ensuite envisagé de faire une version française et une version anglaise mais ça me prenait trop de temps. Du coup, je me contente de l'anglais.
SupprimerNormal.
SupprimerJe suis plus dans les TG captions et le AR mais j'aime aussi le AP et d'autres transformations.
Pour ma part, mon anglais n'était pas assez bon ;).